
Alex and Dorothy are main characters, so of course they get more representation. Toad's next up--he's a big character too, though not so big as Alex and Dorothy. But where's the villain in there? Wolf, as in Big Bad, is in there, but it's tiny. That says a lot. That was one of Editor Liz's notes on the first draft too--we need to see more of the villain. That's one of the many things I'm focusing on with this draft. It will be interesting to do a word cloud of the second draft, once it's finished, and see what new words take prominence. I have a feeling the word "cleats" will also show up more in the next cloud...
But of course, to see that I would have to finish the second draft, which is what I'm off to work on. Toodles!
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